Thank you to all participant for joining the contest!

Well didn't expect got many submission focusing on Naluri.
Well nevermind it.

To be honest, only one really did make me amuse~
But you guys really did well on this entries (some may not) but i really appreciate it all.

Let me make a review/comments/critique on each submission.

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Sort of starting of battlefield and its bring out how the characteristic of each character by the way of their talking and also suicide bomber? Its a nice starting to see the character talking to each other, getting them planned well before ambushing the enemy. A slight generic story only the problem is, my character is not become the main part of the story. Rokiahi and Benci is just a side-kick character.
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Well its still need more practice on all aspect; anatomy, artistic, composition and sense. Well thank you for braving yourself by taking this challenge.
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I see my BRS! I see my Rokiahi and you use gmod to present it. The story of the shot is simple and easy to understand but need to practice on how to take an artistic view of camera angle. The position of camera is dull, the quality of game graphic didn't use anti-aliasing and the last panel looks like stretch and not clear. Please practice to take artistic shots to get better stuff.
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It's simple, plane but sweet. If said "please try put the shading" may destroy the simplicity. This kind of artwork is suitable for use in animation.
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Not much comment on sketches because its base from artist own perspective view. Why did you make conceptual sketches of Naluri though? although its already make. It's for your model reference?
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New Naluri model by Johnny-D-Wicked style~ It's try to be realistic which i like it but putting illumination at some part may make her become weird. So far, the anatomy not amusing enough to beat my original Naluri! i would rate this better if you put some bone and pose her some good posing view with environment at back. More better rate if its cute~~ realistic cute like Rinoa in Final Fantasy
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This is the kind of artwork should be appreciate of. Good at playing lighting at the back and putting Naluri a new kind of realistic look. So far the arts still not clean enough and may need more detail on it. I would rate more if its drawn with full head to thigh plus amusing of course.
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I like you use bright area of Joker in contrast of dark area of everyone else as to focus the main subject at center but I don't know what you going to tell in this picture. Sorry to said, you may need to practice more on composition, camera angle and the motive of the picture.
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A pair of Naluri and Rokiahi stand shot. Its simple and well played on both cell shading style and Dark Horse Comic style. I see dra2k4 try not make both character seductive, safe for kids eh? Its simple and i like it.
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This succeed on telling the happening of the situation. The group of Paskal dancer try make all men in heaven eh? technical wise, you may need to learn by putting shade for your drawing, and learn to control cleanliness when overlapped color on drawing (because i see some white spot between line drawing and color) . Also in logical manners, you don't need guns for dancer. If you dont draw guns in there i might give you good rating.
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Best of the best! This is the only drawing make me


The composition of Naluri become the front subject and the creepy Miku head at the back really make Naluri become stand above front (+Plus Nosebleed stuff )

The detail of gun, cloth and anatomy is really well drawn. So far this drawing got influence from Ghost in The Shell and please, dont make my Naluri this much sexy >_<

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RESULT

Here the result of participant
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1st place: 700 DA points

2nd place: 350 DA points

3rd place: 175 DA points

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4th place: 50 DA points

5th and more: Honorable mention - Stickier on my site

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Thank You for all participant for joining this contest! Hope you guys do better next time!

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